I think, I need a break

I think,
I need a break up,
A Break up,
With those endless acts of unnecessary smiles,
Which really makes me cry!

I think.
I need a change,
A change from,
Those artificial thoughts of teasing me,
Which really makes me feel sigh!

I think,
I need to blast,
A blast to,
Someone who loves me more, but dare not to accept thou,
Which really makes me hate them thou!

I think,
I need a rest,
A rest from,
All that deeds and needs of provocation,
Which really makes me tranquil!

I think,
I need a better,
A better me,
Who can convey the hatred to the loved one,
Which really makes love myselves more!

I think,
I need a love,
A love,
Who, can fill the emptiness around,
Which will wipe all that listed above!

Labels: Posted by ramyapilai

Wednesday, May 4, 2011 at 2:33 PM

2 Comments to "I think, I need a break"

Posted by Scindia Annadurai ( May 4, 2011 at 4:27 PM )

I think,
I need to comment,
A comment,
Which you have always expected,
which really makes me go clueless!

Am glad, that you have finally listed down all your needs!
Now that you have got them right, come on, go ahead, get them done!
Break up,
Change,
Blast,
and go for better love!

Posted by dheva ( May 5, 2011 at 1:09 PM )

I think,
I need to wake up,
A wake up,
Which I want to do always,
Which will Resolve so many things!!!

Hmm Learned Something Ramya!!!! Gr8...

(இந்த கவிதைக்கு ஒரு எதிர் கவிதை எழுதியே ஆகணும்..)

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